Red rivers of blood shimmered in the fiery explosion. Amber screamed, but she knew that there was no hope. They were all dead, their lifeless bodies twisted at impossible angles. She shook with choked sobs as she ran into the black night. She didn't know where she was going, and she didn't care. She just wanted to be far away from the remains of what used to be her life.
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ReplyDeleteYeah, I agree with Erica. I feel like this is a past memory of mine.
ReplyDeleteHoly cow! I was running away from the story it was so descrpitive. I loved your word choice. Great work! =~0
ReplyDeleteThat is very...disturbing. But why do I love it soooooo much!?!? I think it's because you have the best word choice in the class but... I don't know. I don't like the last sentence however... it doesn't make sense to me... don't get me wrong though I'm in LOVE with that paragraph!!!
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